gregoryl 0 Posted February 2, 2013 Hello MattA sport portrait with strong lighting. A couple of thoughts. I like the direct straight on pose. Good detail. I don't know if the lighting was positioned to accentuate the shadows. I might have move the key light down a little and a bit closer to the camera. The shadow from the nose is touching the lips and partially obscures the eye. Possibly reworking the the pp might bring a touch of detail into the trunks. As it is the trunks disappear into the background making it look like a torso floating in air. I don't what the intent of the photo is but I think because of the harsh contrasty lighting it would also work as a monochrome. Again not knowing the intent I might suggest a tighter crop as there is a lot of dead space on the left. I did a quick edit to show what I mean for your consideration. Just my 2 cents.RegardsGreg Link to comment
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