Mural, Clover, South Carolina V

URBAN LANDSCAPE: The problem I faced with this series was finding theright crop. I got the wall at right like I wanted it, as well as thereal tree at bottom right. I also managed to frame the white withmore green along the bottom, but IS THE WHITE NOW TOO MUCH? Anycomments or helpful suggestions would be very much appreciated. I amat my wit's end on this one. THIS WILL BE MY LAST EFFORT, AND THEN IWILL LEAVE IT ALONE--UNLESS SOMEONE COMES UP WITH AN EVEN BETTER CROP,one so good I cannot possibly ignore it..

--Lannie

Here is the original, resized.

 

--Lannie

Well I'm no expert on urban landscape by any stretch, but I think this crop is quite pleasing to the eye Landrum. The white serves to accentuate the colors, and the brick pattern gives the entire wall an interesting texture. You've done well I think.

All the best,
Neil

Thanks, Neil.  The difference between this one and the other versions is that most of the white is surrounded by color.  I think that it works better this way than having the white areas spill off the "canvas."

 

--Lannie