Lindsay @ Arundel Mansion

A beautiful result with very nice lighting, Dale!

With best regards,

Ruud.

Very beautiful, my friend!!

Hi 

very nice portrait great feeling in the eyes, great mouth shape, good light too

Now for the Critique 

The background behind her shoulder draws the eye away from the subject if it was the same as above her head it would have been better but a minor point

The left hand i feel distracts from the composition may be if it had been laid flat on the surface she lays on, when a hand is square to the lens it just looks so large, square and "manly", i always try and have a hand edge on or 45 degree angled to minimize this

and last one is personal taste i would have removed the bra strap by ether PS or asking the model just to drop the strap from her shoulder for the shot (beware sometimes this leaves a skin mark that you have to remove in PS anyway)

I am sorry I truly like the picture but i could not show one of my clients if things like these glare at me :) and my picture may not have been any better that you one here buts that's what i would have tried to do

dont hate me :) 

_al

Hey Al, I am not hatin' at all, thanks for your feedback and suggestions. Good or bad feedback is always welcomed.

Thanks Ruud and Al.

I strongly relate to the eyes and the face in general, but I deplore those piercings around the nose and lips.  I probably am just too old to adapt but in photos they always look like giant zits to me and I retouch them away.

Jerry

Hey Jerry, thanks for the feedback :)

Harmonious

Congrats Dala

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Orsi

Orsi, thanks a lot.