9Shgar

Excellent, love the graphic representation, bravo.

My clients have been Miss America, Playboy, USC cheerleaders, and Bud models, many, many, others as well.

The background is very cool. For modeling, don't crop off the heads nor cut off joints, in your case the knees, the elbows, the hips and the feet - NEVER. Also do something with her right arm. Let publishers do the cropping. With her right arm, maybe have her look at a hand held mirror so something, checking herself out, put her right arm on her waist, not her hip area and tell her to give you an attitude and don't stop shooting with the attitude. Here's a huge secret. Women usually know what to do naturally. You just guide them by saying to move something to the left, the right, tilt the head and they know how to do this just by many years of looking into a mirror. Her right hand can also be holding lipstick towards her lips. Just don't let it hang. You can even ask her to switch it around a bit. Use her right arm to cover up and her left arm behind her head playfully playing with her hair.

You just about nailed this image, therefore a high 5. With careful added lighting, plus a beautiful bracelet it would be a 6.

As it stands, I really like this. Since not much of anything is going on below her breasts this would be my crop point.

Feel free in sending me a file and I can play with Photoshop and try to show different cropping points.

The lady is beautiful. Can you ask her for another photo shoot?

Take some looks at the very top womens magazines and study the front covers. Just go to a book store, no need to buy anything. I hardly ever see heads cut off.

I'm way too picky here, but you are so close to being a top shooter I took the time to try and help you. You have talent. Just build on it. Hope this helps.

savagesax@aol.com

bob

savagesax@aol.com.

My clients have been Miss America, Playboy, USC cheerleaders, and Bud models, many, many, others as well.

The background is very cool. For modeling, don't crop off the heads nor cut off joints, in your case the knees, the elbows, the hips and the feet - NEVER. Also do something with her right arm. Let publishers do the cropping. With her right arm, maybe have her look at a hand held mirror so something, checking herself out, put her right arm on her waist, not her hip area and tell her to give you an attitude and don't stop shooting with the attitude. Here's a huge secret. Women usually know what to do naturally. You just guide them by saying to move something to the left, the right, tilt the head and they know how to do this just by many years of looking into a mirror. Her right hand can also be holding lipstick towards her lips. Just don't let it hang. You can even ask her to switch it around a bit. Use her right arm to cover up and her left arm behind her head playfully playing with her hair.

You just about nailed this image, therefore a high 5. With careful added lighting, plus a beautiful bracelet it would be a 6.

As it stands, I really like this. Since not much of anything is going on below her breasts this would be my crop point.

Feel free in sending me a file and I can play with Photoshop and try to show different cropping points.

The lady is beautiful. Can you ask her for another photo shoot?

Take some looks at the very top womens magazines and study the front covers. Just go to a book store, no need to buy anything. I hardly ever see heads cut off.

I'm way too picky here, but you are so close to being a top shooter I took the time to try and help you. You have talent. Just build on it. Hope this helps.

Oh, get some jewelry on, a neckless, wrists, but not that thing that looks like a rubber band.

savagesax@aol.com

bob

savagesax@aol.com.