Snowy Hillside, Grand Tetons National Park

by Szulecki Joshua

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Gallery: Yellowstone & Grand Tetons NPs (May 2012)

Tags: seeking critique

Category: Nature

Exif Information:
Make : Canon
Model : Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT
Date Time Original : 2012-05-24 12:48:51
Focal Length : 400/1
Shutter Speed Value : 1/500
Exposure Time : 1/500
Aperture Value : 8.0
F Number : 8.0
Iso Speed Ratings : 400
Flash : 16
Metering Mode : 5
Orientation : 1
X Resolution : 72.0000000
Y Resolution : 72.0000000
Software : Microsoft Windows Photo Viewer 6.1.7600.16385

Published: Sunday 30th of September 2012 07:58:31 PM


Comments

Joshua Szulecki

I somewhat concur on the composition. In real life, the three diagonal lines were much more pronounced, and they were what I was using to direct my composition. However, either due to poor framing or poor focal length choice, I managed to compress out the bottom diagonal. I also concur on the exposure...although it does look better in B&W.

Stephen Penland

I also think it's underexposed, and I don't find the composition to be very compelling (but that's very subjective).

Cleeo Wright

One thing that maybe is just an issue with the post and not the original is that this appears to be underexposed.  The snow looks gray...  Looks like a great place to be and at a great time.

Joshua Szulecki
Snowy Hillside in Grand Tetons NP I like it, but I'm mildly disatisfied with it. What would you have done differently?

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