Blue Lauren

Too Dark?

 

Elizabeth

This looks awesome! Very good job. Did you use one light? I don't think it's too dark. I think the crop could be better, maybe try a landscape frame and put more black area in front of her face. I think this would make the impact of the image alot greater by given the face more room to breath. Just a thought. Maybe I'll hop on my photoshop alittle later and try to help you out alittle. 7/7 T.Page

Thanks Toby....This was taken in window light. I had it cropped the other way....couldn't decide which I liked better. I'm trying Adams framing technique...Let me see what you come up with...I appreciate your comments as I love your work.

 

Elizabeth

Nice work, Elizabeth.

Wow!!! very nice Elizabeth.

I like it all, Elizabeth...the lighting, the mood, the expression, the framing. Nice. Very nice.

Just something I came up with. It gives the subject alittle more room to breath. Just my opinion. Enjoy! T.Page

Good work. I appreciate also the advice of Toby.

Anyway...well done!

simple, but nice.

Cropping landscape mode gives it more mystery..is someone in the dark?, what is she looking at?? and so on...That's what this site is all about. I show everyone your Vodka photos & I wish you could hear their reaction..they love them...."how'd he do that??!!" is the most common comment. My answer "In his bathroom with lots of talent". lol

 

Elizabeth

stunningly eerie! Great tone and expression!

Wonderful portrait!

Is she looking through a slightly open door?

Nice work....just alittle to dark for me....

6/5

Excellent.

Very nice. I like Toby's rule of one thirds cropping suggestion. But, it's great just like you have it.

I agree with Toby very good shot except in composition. You shoult try more space on the front.

i think it's perfect. I also like the presentation.

 

Cropping and lighting are excellent, Good work!