Sisters

Still working on portraits....any help is appreciated.

 

Elizabeth

I like the composition here, and the tones - the exposure is just right, IMO. However, as both girls are the subject of the photo, I don't like that the girl on the left is out of focus (only slightly, but noticeable).

The photo appears soft in general, but I presume that's deliberate. I do find the dodged 'halo' around both girls distracting - I'd tone it down, if I kept it at all.

Sorry, my comments sound very negative, but this gives the wrong impression - this is close to being a wonderful portrait, IMO (certainly, I wish I could do as good).

Great sharpness on this pic, the clothes fit well with the background. There is something that catch the eye with the left ear and since you modified the pic for background you could add light to the eyes (little white spot). This photo is great nevetheless

This is good, but is there a reason why the text is off center?

Thank you all for the help. I didn't even notice that the text was off center. Was not paying attention. I will try all your suggestions.

 

Elizabeth