curves

this is my second photo on this site , if you have time give me a

comment please

Potentially great lighting. Some areas of the shot tell about curves, other parts don't. I think you might have cropped most of the head, and got rid of the horizontal line.

Cropping could be better, and I dont think the crumpled sheets go with the "curves" theme. Lighting is great though, and there is a real sense of sensuality. Good effort!

This is a very good effort. It's true that cropping out the lower sheet may enhace attention on the figure.

ahhss.....

The lighting here is messy. There is too large a difference in the dark to light from the left to right, imo. Very unbalanced. Also, the lack of smoothness in the sheets and the angular shadow that cuts across her side take away from the flowing lines that her body potentially offers. If she's up for it, keep trying-it will fall into place as the whole session thing becomes more comfortable. cheers

Nice Curves

Veramente una bella foto. Complimenti per la scelta delle luci e per la bella modella.