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© All Rights Reserved Peter O'Hara copyright 2012

Felicia 2


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Exposure Date: 2012:07:14 16:50:09;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D800;
Exposure Time: 1/2000.0 seconds s;
FNumber: f/2.0;
ISOSpeedRatings: ISO 2500;
ExposureProgram: Other;
ExposureBiasValue: 0
MeteringMode: Other;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 85.0 mm mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 85 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 4.1 (Macintosh);

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Would like to hear your thoughts on how I can improve this image. I

appreciate your time. Happy Shooting :)

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put my name on it!   no wait. . .that would improve MY image!  (never mind, LOL)

very nice photo. . .maybe a slightly different crop to include all of her head? but that may be more of my personal aesthetic preference. . .there's nothing "wrong" with the crop as-is

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Ellery and Asa,Thanks very much for the input. It is greatly appreciated. Asa, as far as the crop, I am glad you mentioned it. I do have another crop with the entire head in frame but this one looks a little more intimate so I went with this one. But something has bothered me about this image and I couldn't put my finger on it. When you mentioned the crop of the head it then hit me that I would rather actually crop a slight bit of the forehead out. As it stands now with so much forehead it almost gives me the feeling of a head that is starting to bald in the front (kind of like Bozo the clown). When I pull the top of the frame down a little this weirdness goes away, at least for me. So thanks again.

Sincerely,

Peter

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