J.H. sun through the trees

a walk in the summer woodlands...

I love the idea of shadows cast onto models. It looks like you might have added a bit of fill which I think actually takes away a bit of the effect. I do also like the way she is looking out of the frame which adds a feeling of mystery.

As a portrait to give to relatives this would rate very low---but as an artistic statement I give it a 5. Her totally relaxed face communicates little yet her facial features are very soothing to the eye. The non-traditional lighting adds interest and the tonal range contributes snap and impact to the image.

much appreciated