Observing

Interesting subject, the choice of tonal range fits with the mood, but the framing is too tightened, more room is needed on top and right side, and the complete feet should be in the frame. Best regards.

Carlos.

Thank you for your comment on my photo. Yes, I see your suggestions. I add another one, not quite the same.

Sidsel

this is beautiful and moving, Sidsel, and i luv the natural tones you've chosen to give it a serious mood; i'd agree; a looser shot with a bit of a dramatic angle on the man's face (like in your attachment) are elements i'd appreciate. nicely seen ;-} dp

Fint bilde. Jeg liker også den nye versjonen bedre, også på grunn av det sideblikket han sender i retning fotografen. Gir bildet en ekstra touch synes jeg.

Eystein