the desert wind

To David,

Sloping horizon is due to change in elevation!

Okay, I gave it a good rating but I find the tilted horizon line very distracting. From the top of the hair down is as good as it gets!

Hi Jim, thanks for your comment and visit. I made a correction. The horizon will soon look artificially leveled. I hope you will be happy with the results. Strait version is clearly more pleasing to the eye.

Yes, I would have to agree with both of you, even though it may be natural, the tilt of the horizon seems too severe.  The horizon adds too much tension to the image; I get the feeling the model is bracing herself, as she slides from right to left.  Otherwise very nice from the sand dunes down.  Best regards...

-Dave

Beautiful image so full of life and visual appeal. I would up the contrast a tad to make the whites pop more.

Wonderful

Great photo, but I feel it would make a stronger composition if you crop a bit from the top. I am attaching an example to show you what I mean. Hope you agree.

Hi Tony, I like your version. "Empty" sky does not contribute much the the overall composition.

Wonderfully original, almost mystical. A gorgeous shot, bravo. 

Intruiging composition. Very unique and powerful. The lines of the model's hair and body are repeated throughout the landscape making this image simply wonderful!

 

 

saw this as a thumbnail on your page...love it...regards....David