oksanaandersen 1 Posted May 10, 2012 This was taken on my trip to Japan. The beauty of this country is breathtaking! I a second guessing myself on this picture. Does this composition work? Thank you for your input! Link to comment
stp 6 Posted May 10, 2012 Oksana, I think your composition generally works. A couple of tweaks you might think about for the next time a similar scene appears: I'd work to include all of the tree in the upper right (with the white blossoms), and not cut off the uppermost branches. At the same time, I'd work to reduce the amount of featureless grass in the lower left. Both of these might have been addressed simply by angling the camera upward. In addition, I think this might be slightly overexposed, and I think you'd have better colors if the brightness were reduced (or, if you can reduce the brights while keeping the shadows as-is, that might be even better). Link to comment
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