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May Sunset #2 (flipped)


atle.g

Unmaniplated except from the flipping.


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Again one of your fantastically well executed landscapes of the fjord. Incredible DOf and stormy sky. Masterful my friend!
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Does the composition work? Im open for any crop suggestion and any

rating, and any other input on this photo. Thanks!!

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I like the sunset. I think the expanse of rocky foreground distracts the eye from the sunset as a focal point. I think I would have tried to tilt the camera upward, or use a longer lens to get past the rocky foreground.
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Beautuful sunset, very impressive clouds. However, I somehow agree with Steven. Just subjective opinion, I'd try to crop off part, maybe half of the rock on the bottom. Nevertheless, it works good as it is.
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Atle, it's always a joy to see your photographs. I like the expanse of lichen-covered boulder; it's like a launching pad. However, I think the effect of the grad on the left is a bit too extreme.
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I like the balance between the foreground and the sky, and the colors at the front of the picture,makes it just a little bit extra, this croping is very good, if you should change anything:,the dark part to the left,needs some more details in the area,it would make the image a bit better. ( my opinion).

Very nice image Atle!. It is very beautiful in Norway.

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ATLE, You are asking us about compsition, i think you dont need anybody, this is an amazing picture

and i just can lay back and keep my eyes on this photo and on your hole work

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Many thanks for the inputs..., and yes the left side is dark,.. if i crop on the left side i also need to do the same on the right side, to avoid that the light beam get centered to much..... i guess i have to agonize on this for a while before i make a final descision. Regards!!
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I think the shadows are fractionally too dominant, so I'd experiment with cropping the sides as you mention. I also think there is fractionally too much weight to the foreground in the composition, although I recognise that the foreground provides a nice neutral toned base, so if you crop some of it off, it might make the picture too dark over-all.

 

I'm not convinced about the coral filter, but it's interesting to see how it looks.

 

The light on the water and on the green forest is great.

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I have no words to express how I feel while looking at this photo!
Great!
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I like how the eye is guided into the picture by the foreground (reminds of some seaside picture where a receding wave gives movement to the foreground and an intorduction to the rest of the frame). I also like how the tone of the foreground can be found on the right background on the top of the cliff (maybe on the left as well, although it is hard to distinguish there between the top of the cliff and the sky).

 

It also looks like we have trouble entering the strait (or whatever it is) because the sun's reflexion make the eye go to the right cliff.

 

The shadows on both sides are too deep for me as I can't see any detail. I don't like them.

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Its an attractive sky and light but I cant help wondering if the combination of 5 stops loss of light with the use of 2 ND grads and a further 1.33 stops with the coral have sucked a lot of features from the cliff tops surrounding this lake which would otherwise have been visible. It's a lot of detail distorting plastic to be putting in front of your lens too. Regarding composition I think its fine. I notice the weight of area afforded to the sky matches up with that for the foreground. I think cropping up from the base of the picture would damage the balance. Besides, the foreground is probably thee most detailed area in the picture. Its markings direct the viewer towards the centre of the picture. I wouldnt crop anything from the composition. Just allow it more light next May.
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I made a print yesterday, where i took away a bit on the sides, and some at the top, to fit the A4 format, the darkness did not appear so prominent as on this one, so i feel it works quite well, with better transition into the dark area. Regarding the coral filter, i don't know if its normally used for warmup the sky, my intention was to use it on foreground textures in late sun, to produce a warmer tone, but have until now found myself using it mostly on the sky. Regarding the cropping im not shure yet, perhaps its a bit too much foreground, but at the same time it enhancing the DOF effect. Phil.. the Lee soft filters are huge and do not deliver what they "promise", 5 fstops would in reality be 3-3,5.

And the coral has the same soft transition. Thanks for the feedbacks. Regards!

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