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Really beautiful work, Line!

Line,

I love the picture, but I would like to see a little headroom for the girl -- especially with her head tilted up. You could have had a little more room on the right (her left), too. I would like to see her facing into the picture rather than out of it. The way the colors blend with the background, yet having her so nicely separated from the background, is very well done. The soft lighting works very well even if the highlight on her left cheek is a little hot.

You have focused well on her eyes, but one catchlight per eye would be preferred.

Nice shot,

Mark

Thanks for the advice. I don't have much opportunity to photograph people, so all criticism is much appreciated. This is a street shot, so, I did not have much control on anything... But your comments were very informative and will be very helpful. Thanks again for taking the time to comment.

Line