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by Szabo Zsolt Andras
Gallery: 2012-2013
Tags: seeking critique
Category: Landscape
Exif Information:
Make : Canon
Model : Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Date Time Original : 2012-02-19 13:18:42
Focal Length : 17/1
Shutter Speed Value : 1/1
Exposure Time : 4/5
Aperture Value : 9.9
F Number : 9.9
Iso Speed Ratings : 100
Flash : 16
Metering Mode : 5
Exposure Mode : 2
Orientation : 1
X Resolution : 300.000000
Y Resolution : 300.000000
Software : Adobe Photoshop CS5 Macintosh
Published: Tuesday 3rd of April 2012 06:31:01 PM
Comments
beautiful shot Zsolt. wonderful perspective but i think it could do with a little more exposure to help highlight aspects of the scene
This is very pretty and I like the blue because it feels natural. But the glowing halo of warmth on the mountain is a bit much for my eyes. I'd tone it down just a touch.
R2
Of-cause, the original is beautiful, colorful and more catchy for the eyes, but I would tone down the blue, specially on the snow, a little bit. IMHO.
thank you for your especially helpful and constructive comments.
Hi Zsolt,
I like the blue cast with the touch of warm sun on the mountain as contrast,it gives a real sense of chilling cold.
Zsolt. Please disregard my last comments, R2 and delete, including this. I having a problem with my computer.
REally well done!
Great shot. #7. Best Regards,
Hi, Zsolt,
Before seeing the 1st. comment I thought the same about the blue cast on it. I think it's too much.
By the way, I love the right and low part of the composition with the highlighted trees and the upper side of the big tree over the awe sky BG. I just mind too over if it's possible to include the entire different texture of snow on FG behind the tree. Very good job here. 6/7.
thanks for the comments!
Bela: no problem. but i am not able to delet your comments.
Jeff: the red glow was much much more strong in reality, it is toned down almost 2 stops to not be overexposed, because the limitations of our sensors and screens. i personally would left it that strong if that would be possible technically. thanks anyway.
Zsolt Andras Szabo
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comments welcome.