Logan

Have at it...

good angle on the body, good use of dof

The color is interseting. To me its oversaturated, but that makes it intersting as well :)

It is a little oversaturated, but it works. Nice look here. A little dusty, but I'm sure that's from the scan process. Try a 5x7 crop.

A little dusty...

Correct - I have no editing software - all I get is whatever comes off the scanner from cheap photomat prints, so I can't even clean up dust.

To me its oversaturated...

Well, I now have GIMP. I don't know what I'm doing well enough to fix the color, but I did figure out how to desaturate, so I did that, tweaked the brightness and contrast a bit, fixed a stray hair or two, and added a border.

Round two.