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Nice rim  lighting in the hair and the lighting in general is very good, your cousin is cute,  her sari is beautiful, and this is very competent work, however I think  the composition of this portrait could be improved by cropping off most of the blank black area on the right hand side and about the same amount off the bottom to concentrate the image and maintain the same height to width proportion of the picture .

Thanks a lot for your comments. But I tried some offbeat composition. So I put lots of blank places. As per your suggestions it would be a most used composition but I just want to know whether this composition works or not. Please comment.

Gorgeous model with wonderful colors. Beautiful presentation! Love the use of light to separate her from back ground.  Warm regards.

Beautiful portrait. Fantastic light and color. Lovely pose as well.