Backyard camping

good work, but I think here you put too many eyecatchers in. I do'nt know where to go :-)

best regards robertO

This is a composite based on selective direct overlays of four shots.

Too busy? Any suggestions on technical details? Thanks in advance for

you comments.

Horizon should have been adjusted to be horizonal.

A 0.5 degree left rotation may have been too much. That fence isn't all that level in the first place :-) Does splitting the image help the crowding, or is it just worse that way? Thanks for the comments.

Sorry.. it does not work for me. There is no artistry here. You showed that you can create a composite image, but because there is no focal point and no story to be told, this one is just an exercise in overlays. try putting two really interesting related images together in a way that you feel a story is to be told... then try again...

Thanks all for the critique. It's back to the drawing board for this one :-)

I find the left half of the frame pretty weird and intriguing, but the tent is sort of a non sequitur. What really catches my attention is the contrast between the black silhouette and the inverted white silhouette. My eye wants the black figure's hand to be further from the top of the doorframe. Maybe get rid of the shed completely, or substitue it for something else. Anyway, the strange silhouetted figures are what really grab me.