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Alice in wonderlandly.??

 

Comments welcomed.

 

Elizabeth

very soft very nice - stem looks strange tho' it could almost be removed and would leave a "time passed" concept

Hi Elizabeth, I like the idea, I'm not sure about the stem either, everything else is fine. I can't make any suggestions - Richard.

It's susposed to look like a fairyland stem. Like the beak of a bird spitting out the flower.

Only in my mine I guess..Maybe I should add eyes.

 

Elizabeth

Nice work.

I think what I like best is the high key feeling with soft whites and low contrast lighting. Nice composition with the flower close to the bottom of the frame.

Completely enchanting. As if I've fallen through the looking glass and the Hookah-Smoking Catepillar is asking "Who R U?"

That's exactly what I had in mind. ! lol

I love your explanations, you certainly have a talent for writing. Thanks ..I guess the word I was looking for was whimsical,.but, I like yours better.

 

Elizabeth

I like it, everything looks so crystal and almosted painted, i had alittle trouble understand when was going on with the stem and the flower, but i like how the flower stand out in the picture

I like Jim's idea too. You have a great imagination.

Hi Elizabeth - This is really quite beautiful! And very original! You did a fantastic job with the lighting. The only suggestion I would make is to just give it a bit more room on the left. The tip of the vase is a little to close to the edge of the frame in my opinion. But that's it for complaints!

 

Very nice!

Interesting composition.

Astounding! Wow. I'm really impressed. I'm not sharp enough to get the "idea" but I like what I see. I like the blend of manipulation vs realism. The whites are so soft and believable, and the flower looks like it has formed by dripping out of the stem.

 

Bob's idea about moving the left edge over is a good one, I think, and I would experiment with the brightness value of the stem, which is a fancy way of saying I think it is too dark.

I had to revisit this one Elizabeth and I'm glad I did, I now understand it and it has helped. Jim's explanation has a way of saying it out loud but politely. Now I feel sorry for the poor flower :-( Richard.

wonderful work

HS 7.7

Lovely. Original composition.

you do some very nice work...this has some original qualities as it is very well phootgraphed and presented