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How can this picture be improved?

this is the best of your 3 shot.... nice use of bw and composition

Unusual "portrait" in dramatic style. Well done!

Left side seems "to heavy", and it "takes part of attention"... I'd crop off a little bit, but it's just my opinion:)

I rate this a 3 because of poor tonal separation of the subject and the background. His placement in the composition is close to the rule of thirds so I am looking at his head but the overall impact is low for me. Get some separation of his head and the background and crop to remove the left half of the composition so that your center of interest is stronger. Good luck.