Entrance to the Caixa Forum (II)

Thank you for your comments and critiques!

Framing, lighting and subject are fine, but IMHO it is a bit underexposed and the movement is also a bit excessive. I like the view from top.

.very beautiful work!

well done!

Caixa forum has a unique architecture. I'd agree to José's first point that this seems to be a bit underexposed. However, the composition - especially usage of lines is almost perfect (I wonder whether cropping the foreground element in the lower right corner might even improve it a bit). What really works great is, how the traingle starting in upper left corner opens towards the two persons - well timed!

And, from my point of view, motion blur is not too much - it's just right and a welcome counterpart to metal surfaces and strict lines.

Best regards, Wolfgang

 

I think it is just a nicely composed and well timed picture. Motion is perfect. Just because it is good you can play with cropping, exposure and everything else - you are it's creator after all. Best regards, Tamara

I like the composition all together.I like the play of light on the steps,darker on the upper part and getting lighter on the lower (or vs). The lines are creating many triangles and I like the way the human figures are like "melting"into the steps. Very nice angle chosen, that opens like a" flower" going up.Interesting place , well executed.

Great graphical effect; very good combination of movement, lines and colors. Compliments

I like both your first version and this one. In both, I like the geometry and the light giving a metallic aspect to the form. I like also the blur of the persons with nicely contrast with the strict straight lines. Of the two I prefer this one with only two persons. It's less crowded to my taste allowing my eyes to enjoy the movement and the shapes. Regards, Jean-Marc

This has a bit of the feeling of an M.C. Escher print with its fool-the-eye geometry.

This sort of picture is the kind that I find very attractive, very artistic.

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