persian traditional bakery

mahshare

az inke dobare be rangi gereftan ru ovordi khushhalam, say kon ye tasvire ghashang az iran neshun bedi. ghorbanat

colors and shapes are very good , but it i sa pity that the framing cut main elements (the bread and almost the hole ).

Great idea. I like 'Tanduri chapati'. Nice capture.. tell me one thing...is it 'Tanduri'?

Wonderful use of color and shapes.I can almost taste the bread and feel the warmth.

Composition and colors are great. Originality-7

I agree with the above comment that it's a real shame that the crop is so tight. The colors and shapes are wonderful.

I am so sorry that someone has called this talented picture a shame! if you see this beautiful then where is the shame? You could guide the composer for correct cropping instead. Ehsan, your eyes see good things. keep on going on.

Mahrashk - I didn't call the picture a shame, I called the selected cropping a shame. In addition I did refer to what would be better when I made mention of the original post that suggested the crop cut into vital elements of the photo, and when I said it was a "shame that the crop is so tight". The reason that it is a shame that it is cropped this way is because the image is almost so so good. If the picture wasn't any good, it wouldn't be a shame at all.

ok I surrender! ;)

 

I really like the mood (?) of this picture! THe warm color is great! Would like to taste the bread!

 

Greetings from Gabi

I love this image;az too akset booye noone taze miad;good luck my friend

 

Good job capturing the mood of the bakery and still keeping the composition clean.

interesting document and a nice photo

Please stop uploading this picture !!! I've seen it for two weeks !! what do you want know yet ??

Yes, please stop repeatedly posting this picture for critique. It's getting old seeing it every day.

I agree with the above. Have seen this enough. And if I rate this as a portrait, you are not going to be very happy.

I love the fire and how it glows upon the bread! GREAT COMPOSITION!

That is really a great shot.

Very nice and well done !

I like the composition here -- the tightness of this allows the view to fully experience the rich textures present in the bread and ceramic - The cropping also helps us know that there is more communicated than what we see -- and fosters imagination in the viewer to visualize the tender of this fire -- and what the spaces and textures might lead to beyond the edges of the frame. Essentially this image goes beyond what is seen through the camera lens. Breaking the edges of the format with the subject makes the image interesting..

 

 

I would think that the picture would improve, and the eye wouldn't wander off the page if it was cropped a little differently, the upper right hand corner is a little distracting and takes something away from the photo - personally speaking ofcourse, but hope this helps. Overall, great thinking and nice original shot.

As usual, wonderfull.

We also use the same technique(it's used rarely nowadays) in Turkey and call this kind of bread tandir. Nice colour and composition.

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