walls of remembrance

The subject is appealing and the composition is very good. At a time when I would want to explore the details with more clarity, I find it a bit soft and romantic.  

Really beautiful and original work, Richard!

 

comments welcome

I think photos of these old places can tell a story and I like the focal point being the doors which offer up all kinds of questions about what kind of life went on behind them. Perhaps the focus is too soft, blurring alot of good detail in them though. This would be interesting in black and white as well as it would bring out the starkness of the abandoned building. I really like these old and forgotten places. They are such an opportunity for creativity as seen here. Overall I like what you've done but a bit on the soft side for my taste but that's just me. I would like to see more shots of this place. Very nice.