2008-2009-2010 Wonderland "The Love"

Kemal,

I like the feeling you have achieved, but she does seem to be a tad squished on the sides. I wonder if a horizontal format might have worked better? The rather large empty space above her may add to a feeling of despair of loneliness, but I don't think this was your intent. I do find the line from her back to her head (around her neck) to be a bit awkward looking. It seems like she would hurt to be bent over that far. 

For a portrait I think I would like to see her face receive a bit more light. Her neck seems to be the major emphasis of the portrait because it has the most light and is the brightest.

There are some lines and spots in on the background that I find a bit distracting.

It is quite appropriate to place your name and the date the photograph was made, if you wish, on a mat surrounding the photograph. Any advertising would be better placed on the back of the photograph. You don't want anything to draw attention away from your subject.

"AKCA" ? Does this mean that you can win Best In Show?

Nice shot,

Mark

Dear Mark

i can not speak english very well..but i try for understand you..

i didn't like horizontal..and another technical subjects doesn't matter as per emotions as for me..

if you feel this emotions it is ok..this is important..always and always..

thank you for your visit and comments..kind regards

I love the way the light is playing with her in this image and I find it to be highly effective - reflecting off her hair and touching the back of her neck, shoulders, chest and upper thighs; these are all areas which are sensitive. Your title adds to the overall sensuality and dreamy feeling of being in love. Beautiful work! Thank you for sharing. :)