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GREAT EGRET IN FLIGHT AGAINST WATER REFLECTED 004


dave_dise1

Exposure Date: 2011:12:30 09:43:45;
Make: Canon;
Model: Canon EOS 7D;
ExposureTime: 1/320 s;
FNumber: f/7;
ISOSpeedRatings: 100;
ExposureProgram: Shutter priority;
ExposureBiasValue: 0;
MeteringMode: Spot;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 168 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows;


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All C&C and ratings are quite welcome. As a serious hobbyist trying to

improve, I appreciate any ideas on how this shot would be better. Will

try to return the favor. Thanks

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Hi Dave- this is a very nice image. You managed to capture the egret and his reflection quite well. In terms of "even good can be better" there are several things you might consider: first, the reflection is almost running off the page. You could recompose, but because these type shots are generally "catch it now", a possible post capture solution is to crop the top part of the image thus placing both the egret and his reflection without the top blue. Of-course, this still places the reflection on the edge of the image (less than desirable), but without the large expanse of blue on the top, the effect is lessened somewhat. I hope that makes sense to you!

The second issue (I am picking at nits here) is the egret is a bit overexposed. This is a chronic problem when photographing white birds against a blue sky or blue water. You can try underexposing the egret by 1/3-1/2 stop or, again in post-capture, adjust the contrast and saturation of the egret using the sliders. The idea is to try showing a bit more detail in the feathers of the egret.

Please don't think your image is not good - it's quite good, but there is almost always some room for learning and improving.

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John- thanks for your comment. It is always a pleasure to hear from you.

 

Irene - I deeply appreciate your feedback. It is what I am looking for from PN members - ways to improve. Few people are willing to give or accept constructive critique and I thank you very much for yours. Your suggestions are right on and I found them very helpful. Feel free anytime to provide any suggestions you may have on any of my photos.

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