Deniz

best wishes

Great eye contact. Your image looks more like a painting to me. Nicely done.

 

the girl with kaleidoscope eyes...

I never tire of seeing your portraiture and this well toned image does not disappoint.

The eyes are powerful and direct, hanging on the wall, this image would capture the attention of all...

 

Thank you for sharing!

Captivating eyes. Beautiful model and image.

Great light and color. Her eyes pulled me right into the photo. The light is ultra soft but still a nice ratio. I really like it.

Beautiful model and astonishing eyes. Perfect eye contact and believable pose: there is nothing artificial or forced in her expression.

Without being a portrait photographer, I dare to make some comments:

1. I find the image too dark for such a portrait. Other portraits in your gallery are dark with a reason. This one deserves a broader tonal range. Such face and eyes need to shine and capture the viewer in the magic of her looks.
2. I find your choice of framing (7:5 landscape) a bit uninspired. Too much background on the sides does not help in my opinion. I would change it to square format (see next comment as well).
3. I would have loved to see the whole head - the square format would have worked even better leaving enough background for the atmosphere but not too much to become distracting.

I attached my take on this portrait as an illustration of my subjective comments. Please take everything with a grain of salt because I'm not either an expert nor I pretend to be an artist. 

Thank you for sharing your beautiful work with us.

 

Thank you dear Stefan but i don't like your editing..best wishes

I do agree that it is a little dark in areas but that being said...WOW...what unbelievable eyes and eye contact in this photograph. Stunning is the word I would use to describe it.

That eye contact is such that it basically sucks you in. The framing and what is going on around those eyes is irrelevant since the eye contact is strong. I would like to see the photo a bit brighter but hey who am I to criticize a picture like this.