Portrait of my Father

This is my first time shooting portraits in a studio, i would welcome all

critiques good and bad.

I really like this shot.  If I had one small criticism it would be the partial lighting of the right eye - I personally found it to be distracting. This shot might also look good in B&W.  Please fell free to comment on any of my attempts - I am by no means an expert.  Kind Regards, Steve.