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Crackles wall


niki3

Exposure Date: 2011:10:17 19:33:36;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D300S;
Exposure Time: 1/125.0 seconds s;
FNumber: f/6.3;
ISOSpeedRatings: ISO 400;
ExposureProgram: Other;
ExposureBiasValue: 0
MeteringMode: Other;
Flash: Flash did not fire;
FocalLength: 85.0 mm mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 127 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Macintosh;


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I like the pose of the portrait very much . The crackles bother me a bit , they drag my eye away from the young Lady . Maybe if it wasn't so sharp and bright .... other wise a very striking image .  Bill

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I love the concept but agree with William - There is a bright spot on the wall that is just a fraction too bright and keeps attracting my eye. I would have preferred a more even and less bright lighting on the wall.

I also have a problem with the models right hand which is both bright and a bit claw like - it doesn't look very relaxed. Lastly the fact that she is looking downwards makes the eyes narrow and harder to see.

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Hello Niki,

Lovely shot.  Nice pose and the moving hair gives an interesting dynamic to the picture. 

I agree with previous comments about the bright spot on the background, it draws away the attention from the face.  Maybe darkening a little bit the bright areas on the arms and background would also result in an even stronger picture.

Well Done,

Ben

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