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Artist: Gregory A Ferdinandsen;
Exposure Date: 2010:05:12 16:39:45;
Copyright: © Gregory A. Ferdinandsen;
Make: Canon;
Model: Canon EOS 5D;
ExposureTime: 1/60 s;
FNumber: f/11;
ISOSpeedRatings: 250;
ExposureProgram: Shutter priority;
ExposureBiasValue: 0;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 17 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows;


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It is a lovely image. I would like to make a couple of recommendations:

 

1. remove the jet stream cloud,

2. Open up the dark shadow area on the left

3. Darken the blue sky and add a bit of contrast to get the white clouds a bit whiter

4. Convert to an Ansel Adams type Black and white ensureing a wide range of tones.

5. Print and hang on your wall

6. The next time you visit this area try and get some images during the magic hours (early in the morning and late in the afternoon)

 

All the very best

 

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Bet you don't get too many critiques like this *_* - I only do one like this per month and I choose randomly.  *_*

 

Have a great day and continue to take many more great images.

 

 

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