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Critiques appreciated.

The flow of lines is excellent in this one, lunar shaped circles that both envelop and complement each other, not just the obvious ones, but the eyebrow and the arm too .. the piercing gives a point of focus but I cannot decide if it contributes or not to my liking of the image. Very interesting work Jim, bravo .. I almost never mention the models, but they do a terrific job too obviously. I think their most important contribution often is to understand and act on what the photographer wants. 

Don't think this deserves the low ratings it's been getting. I like the Salvador Dali look on this one, and I think it's simpler and more effective than other of your recent W/A nudes.