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I like the theme rather a lot. Compositionally, the model is looking away from the scene which could be rendered more positively by her looking inwards. I also want to see more to the left. It feels like an expanded landscape painting in the classical sense but for that to work you need to leave more room to the left. The rocks behind the model is certainly too dark. While it does add an element of contrast to the pale skin of the model, there is a lot of mystery. I would like to have seen critical sharpness on the model.