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Contax 645, 80mm, Porta 160VC

Open the big one.

Comments are welcome, thank you.

Your image is well composed in my opinion, the only topic for me will be to decrease a bit more the DoF;from my point of view, we will get a narrow area around the model ,the red frame disturb a bit my attention  stolen the importance to the model.we don't forget that is the main subject, she's "Star" .Well is my honest opinion, of course that is subjective. I would like to stand up several things :

1) the light, it is beautiful

2) the model's expression and sight

3) The pose holding the guitar by this way and at same time holding her head on her hand.

4) The poster works fine as background ;-)

Best regards