Pierre Dumas 286 Posted March 1, 2012 We have here a great story, but the character of the lighting doesn't let us concentrate on it! The overexposed end of the perspective attracts attention and the singer we can omit to see at all! The composition is well done and the tunnel stairway is very interesting!Best regards Mircea!PDE Link to comment
mirceatt 1,965 Posted March 1, 2012 Thank you, Pierre for your version !My idea was to keep him in the gloom.Best regards, Mircea Link to comment
aarkp 2 Posted March 1, 2012 I have a great deal of respect for Pierre but here I disagree with him. In gloom he should remain (I mean the singer, obviously!). The whiteness of the accordion serves well enough to draw my attention to him. I like the dark toning. I wonder about the composition though... the large expanse of wall on the left is not of much interest to me. I wonder why a horizontal view was preferred to a vertical one. Link to comment
svetlana_korolyova 27 Posted March 2, 2012 Interesting geometry and perspective. Although bright background distracts my eyes from the musician. Link to comment
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