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Wormwood and the chain!


ray watson

Cropped and unsharp mask.


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Saw this large fence post with worm trails and an old chain looped across it. I thought it made an interesting composition. Thoughts / comment appreciated.
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Agreed. I like that you weren't put off by such a low-saturation scene. It's just a tiny step from black and white!
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I tried desaturating in photoshop. The only real difference was the chain. I found I liked it better with the chain colored. It stands out better and adds more contrast to the image.
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With an eye this discerning, you should treat yourself to a real camera. This is so subtle and beautiful. You have a sophisticated eye, don't compromise it... t
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I want to see Kanji in the woodworm markings - it gives the image an unexpectedly Japanese feel to it. But then I may just be projecting something personal into your image. It works, though. The image balances nicely. Well done!
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I have the uncomfortable feeling this shot is tilted to the left. Good shot with nice detail though but it would help if that knot wasn't on the edge
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Good eye Ian. The post is part of an entry way of a rural driveway. It is a cedar post about 15 ft high or so. In the area photographed the tree is slightly curved to the left.

I tried to recrop to remove the knot but it left too little of the chain and did not seem as nice. Thanks for the comments.

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Real good. Nice interplay of textures. I would darken the left edge about 10 or 15 %. If this were mine, I would entertain the idea of dropping "the Chain" from the title, just calling it "Wormwood" for a subtle title to the subtle image. The wormtracks look like a mythical figure, part animal, part human, a cave drawing or rock art. The chain adds a healthy shot of reality.
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Simple and yet full of detail and texture very japanese feel. Not sure about the frame though?
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With all respect, I just do not understand the attraction of this photo, but since I am a minority, I must me wrong. On the other hand ... I am giving attention to it ... !!
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This photo really caught my eye- its simplicity in design and fine detail draw you in, with just enough happening on it to keep you looking. I would love to produce a picture like this
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Very nice image, Ray. I agree that the color of the chain is important for its impact and so I would also favor this version over a desaturated one. I am amazed that the worms create patterns like this -- as others above have mentioned, it looks like Japanese! Excellent textures.

 

The tilt is mildly bothersome. Any chance of a reshoot without the tilt?

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Thanks Niranjan, I will try to reshoot the next time I am in that area ( maybe I'll even use a tripod and film instead of digital and see what it does.
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At risk of sounding like "me too", I really like this .. until I read the comments I thought the chain had be hand tinted. The wood worm has become like one of those ink blot tests. I might have framed the shot to keep that knot in but a further away from the edge but its a great composition.
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