Jeremy Stein 0 Posted September 11, 2011 Composition is excellent - exposure needs some work. I'd like to see a little more detail in the darker areas. Link to comment
bela_dick 0 Posted September 11, 2011 Hi Jeremy!Thanks a lot for important feedback. I have a real problem finding the right balance of the graytones. My screen must be much lighter than others I think. So I tend to give to much darker tones.I have given up calibrating my screen - never get it right :(But thanks again.Kind RegardsBela Dick Link to comment
rlopezmoral 1 Posted September 11, 2011 Undoubtedly, the most valuable thing in this shot is its excellent & attractive composition. Gray tones are okey at my monitor ... The woman at the center of the scene enhances the simmetry of the stairs, giving life to this shot. Love it ... (7) Kind regards Link to comment
svetlana_korolyova 26 Posted September 11, 2011 Very very interesting lines and angles, very well seen! Link to comment
doug_gentry 0 Posted September 11, 2011 Well composed and titled! Your tonal quality is right on and overall a fine image! Regards, Doug. Link to comment
bela_dick 0 Posted September 11, 2011 Thank you Svetlana, Ricardo, Dough, Sid and Vlad.I appreciate every word very much. Kind regardsBela Dick Link to comment
richard_john_edwards 0 Posted September 11, 2011 Bella this is a striking image, the geometry, the tonal contrast and most of all the moment of capture, the crossed legs add to the geometry of the image and compliment the scene perfectly. your choice of cropping / format also work extremely well here. 6Best Regards Richard Link to comment
bela_dick 0 Posted September 11, 2011 Thanks RichardI had two shots. This was the second. The first one was half a step to early. I liked this -the second one - cos of the crossed legs also forming a triangular shape. I was really lucky she made this step just at the right place. Kind regardsBela Dick Link to comment
alberto_simalan 0 Posted September 11, 2011 Gray and midtones are perfect at my calibrated monitor.Nice capture and framing are excellent.IMHO geometry coul be better if the line in the left can start from the left upper angle.ciaoalberto Link to comment
amitai schwartz 0 Posted September 12, 2011 Let me add to the chorus. This is an excellently composed image. The elements work very well together. I don't see any problem on my calibrated monitor. Link to comment
bela_dick 0 Posted September 12, 2011 Hi Alberto: Thanks for your comment. The idea with the line from the left corner has been considered and I see your point. The reason why I finally choose this alternative was to have the person in the center. I was afraid the line would have got to much attention and depress the others one.And thank you very much for the feedback on tonality from your calibrated screen.. That helps me a lot.Kind regardsBela Dick Link to comment
bela_dick 0 Posted September 12, 2011 Hi AmitaiThanks for your comment. I am happy you confirm the gray tones.Kind RegardsBela Dick Link to comment
wimputs 0 Posted September 12, 2011 Very good.The lines, and taken at a good moment.No problem with the BW tones. Link to comment
bela_dick 0 Posted September 12, 2011 Thank you Anonymous.I appreciate your words.Kind regardsBela Dick Link to comment
svetlana_korolyova 26 Posted September 13, 2011 But I can not put a rating, I get the the answer:"The requested URL cannot be accessed due to a system error on this server" Link to comment
bela_dick 0 Posted September 13, 2011 Thanks SvetlanaI have a filter for filtering out "6 or higher" ;)OK it is a joke. Like the way some give ratings. I just have it on for fun. I appreciate more words and comments.But anyway thanks. Kind regardsBela Dick Link to comment
thadley 10 Posted September 14, 2011 Excellent composition and the person is in the 'right' spot. There is symmetry and lovely tonal range. Well done - rated 6. Link to comment
alones 1 Posted September 14, 2011 A most beautiful geometric composition ............ Good work my friend Link to comment
bela_dick 0 Posted September 14, 2011 Thanks Tony. Appreciate your view very very much. And that goes for you too, Alon.Kind RegardBela Dick Link to comment
svetlana_korolyova 26 Posted September 14, 2011 Other members of Photo.net have a problem with rating too.This problem is discussed at forumhttp://photo.net/site-help-forum/00ZJ5U.Thank you very much for your comments on my shots!Svetlana. Link to comment
GailAnthonyHarmer 5 Posted September 18, 2011 Your photo suits the title to a T ! Lovely angles and perspective, the beautiful woman coming down the steps is a great central point for our vision. Very well composed, perfect timing and great editing Bela!Kindest regards, Gail Link to comment
bela_dick 0 Posted September 18, 2011 Hi GailThanks for your comment. The beautiful lady is actually some VIP, but I did not know that as I took the shot. I was informed later on about that.Kind regards Bela Dick Link to comment
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