markgreenfield 0 Posted September 4, 2011 I'm a big fan of leading lines, and these are great, but... I'm not a fan of the (yellow) framing. I find it makes the shot look "cheap", like some dollarstore postcard. I also find the wisp of cloud right at the top that bleeds into the border somewhat distracting. I'm not wild about the vignette either. I took the liberty of producing an alternative version, where I increased the lightness of the trees, darkened the clouds slightly, removed the vignette and added a simpler border. I hope this helps. Mark Link to comment
markgreenfield 0 Posted September 4, 2011 Couldn't attached the image to previous post. Link to comment
frigo 4,155 Posted September 5, 2011 Hi Mark,Thanks for taking the time to volunteer a critique on this photo.Laurent Link to comment
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