ken_thalheimer 3,739 Posted April 1, 2003 I like the originality. It tells a story of what the child is doing. Just wish it had more DOF. There are key elements which need to be sharper Link to comment
Wayne Melia 6,031 Posted May 12, 2003 Well scene and composed to capture the moment and intrigue the viewer.Agree that focus is an issue - focus point seems to be at upper corner of box (better on the pens?). Combined with extreme colour saturation of rug there, it creates a magnet for the eye in a photo that IMO limits the scene as a whole. Maybe lower saturation a bit?Nits, however. Congrats. Link to comment
koska 0 Posted June 2, 2003 A funny shot... nicely composed... Too bad it's oversaturated... Link to comment
mgm 0 Posted June 2, 2003 "Too bad it's oversaturated"?! C'mon, that's pretty easy to fix in Photoshop. See example above. Link to comment
a_smitty 0 Posted June 11, 2003 I am a novice, so I don't feel right in commenting on the technical aspects. I will say that if presented with the same opportunity, I don't think I would have taken such a creative approach to the subject. Very intriguing! Link to comment
pimderuijter 0 Posted June 11, 2003 I like this photo! It gives you a lot to guess and it illustrates the feeling to be a harmless kid! The colors are great, also the composition! Link to comment
seven 0 Posted June 12, 2003 An idea with promise. It does leave something to complete with the imagination. Agree with comments regarding softness and saturation. The carpet is very busy though colourful - I think to lay more colour upon it might have been stretching things : whites and greys might have worked better in their neutrality. Link to comment
panzerwolf 0 Posted June 22, 2003 interesting concept and good composition...but too oversaturated and unfocused... Link to comment
siavash_arian 0 Posted June 22, 2003 aks e besiar zibaee ast.be nazar e man tarkib e rangha kheily khoob boodeh va parakandegi e ghalam ha bar jazzabiat e kar e shoma afzoodeh.movaffagh bashid . Link to comment
nikonuserf100 0 Posted August 21, 2003 Nice work. It could be better in some areas, but generally appealing in nature. Link to comment
ciofalo 0 Posted August 21, 2003 An excellent idea. Good eye. The slightly less saturated version works better, and a neutral carpet or one with a soft colour would have been better yet, but that's it... Link to comment
richard thompson www.fotoz 0 Posted August 21, 2003 Great - I love this. Its the clasic story. Child plays with items. Discards. Moves on. Great !! Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted November 13, 2003 hehe, funny picture, I like it. Vivid, catchy, nice style and great composition. Nice !!! :) -v- Link to comment
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