Sweet Innocence

Really sweet. Your daughter or granddaughter maybe?

Very nice portrait.

Very nice picture. You captured the moment succesfully. One thing that sticks out for me is the cropping is a bit too close on the right side. Nice sweet expression and pose. I like the way you filled the frame with the subject.

Would appreciate your comments. Thanks

crop til it hurts; down to her bangs, across to her cheek. that will get rid of the background and heighten interest in the wonderful expression and hands. then you will have a very powerful portrait! no rate, just advice.