alfbailey 2 Posted July 30, 2011 The last image was a HDR from the bottom of the steps, I'd thought I'd try and balance thiings with this one, a normally processed image from about half way the steps. Whilst I fiddled about with my tripod, trying to get it level on the steps, the old gentleman climbed the steps, I watched him labour over the steep ascent, and patiently waited for him to pass in order to take my next shot. To my surprise and slight annoyance he stopped right in front of me......it quickly dawned on me he had presented me with this opportunity. Your thoughts and comments are always appreciated. Thank You. Link to comment
Donna Stavis 0 Posted July 30, 2011 Hello Alf. Harmonic. No aspect dominates. Beautiful muted colors gives a feel of peace, with a good composition with the steps that break the pure peace. I like the delicate flowers and see the street lamp like one of your trademark mini lighthouses. And now I see in the distance a real lighthouse, something I associate with your photographs. I love this Link to comment
benhuybrechts 0 Posted July 30, 2011 Hello Alf,When I was browsing through the thumbnails of the critique forum, my first thought seeing this one, was "this must be one of Alf's". And I was right, it shows that you have a very distinct style, which is very good. The man in the picture makes it a much stronger picture. Well Done,Ben Link to comment
Pierre Dumas 260 Posted July 30, 2011 Thank you for your generosity of uploading a descent size Alf, some people here upload copies smaller than a thumbnail in order to protect their copyrights, ha!I think I've seen the same place on a better picture(s), hope it has been yours!Best regards!PDE Link to comment
w-j-li 0 Posted July 30, 2011 One of your best. Love your photos, including this one. Alway looks nature and well balance. Best Regards, Link to comment
blue-olympus 0 Posted July 30, 2011 Your a lucky man Alf...he adds balance to the right. Lovely scene, I was only a few miles away the other week but never quite made it to Whitby...nevermind:-((.....Regards Link to comment
photo by patsy dunn 1 Posted July 30, 2011 Alf, Beautiful creative image with wonderful processing. Thanks for sharing this wonderful image. Take care, Patsy Link to comment
mike_palermiti 3 Posted July 31, 2011 Hi Alf,Outstanding work.Excellent photography is part lens, part composition and part operator.You have excelled in every aspect noted here.Best Regards, Mike Link to comment
h_r_herle 0 Posted July 31, 2011 Hi Alf, A beautiful place, well captured and presented. Agree with you and all that the man has increased the already beautiful composition by '2 stops' more.Thanks Alf for sharing,Harsha. Link to comment
ndj 0 Posted July 31, 2011 An excellent image with plenty of English charm. The resting man really adds a human twist to this fine shot. Well done Alf!All the best,Neil Link to comment
llgarcia 1 Posted July 31, 2011 I like your rendition of this place, Alf. So natural and very inviting to walk down the steps and join the man to enjoy the rest of the view. Beautiful perspective and well exposed and processed. Regards! - Lester Link to comment
alfbailey 2 Posted August 1, 2011 DONNA Many thanks for your thougtful and detailed feedback, much appreciated. One of the reason I posted this was because it was the opposite view of the previous post, and the other reason is it gives a flavour of the town itself. The lighthouse you can see was one of the reasons I visited Whitby, there was a particular shot I wanted, alas when I go there, the lighthouse was under repair and covered in scaffolding (you can just see it in the large view), so it looks like another trip will have to be arranged. I'm really pleased you liked it Donna.Best RegardsAlf BENSincere thanks for your thoughts and positive feedback. I'm always aware of other peoples "styles" but never really considered I had one myself.........but its encouraging to know that I have, and even more that its recognisable. Yeah I think the Man in the image adds interest and scale to the perspective.Best RegardsAlfPIERRE Many Thanks for your kind words and thoughts, much appreciated. I've seen better shots of this location too, unfortunately they were not mine. But I can aspire to be as good I hope one day. As for the large size, I think on some images its really necessary. I thought it was on this one because of the distant detail in the town etc.CheersAlfWANGHANSincere thanks for your kind words and positive feedback, much appreciated. I'm really pleased you liked it.Kind RegardsAlfKEITH Shame you didn't make it to Whitby, its got some fascinating views and I'm sure you would enjoy the narrow cobbled streets etc. And we could have had a pint and discussed photography at length.....ahh well maybe next time eh! Yes your right I was very fortunate that the old gentleman stopped where he did. Many thanksRegardsAlfPATSY Many thanks for your kind words and enthusiastic feedback, I'm really pleased you liked it.Best RegardsAlfMIKESincere Thanks for your most encouraging and positive feedback. I am haunted by your recent photo of the fishing float and the story that accompanied it.........its one I will remember for a long time.Cheers MikeAlfHARSHAMany Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts, very much appreciated. I was very fortunate that the man arrived when he did. I was even more fortunate that realisation hit me that the opportunity was staring me right in the face. I think it was a valuable lesson for me that a different occurance than the one I expected can be an opportunity if I open my mind to it.Best RegardsAlfNEILMany thanks for your views and positive feedback, much appreciated. "English Charm" .....not that much of it left I'm afraid ...consecutive town planners seem intent in reproducing towns that represent clones of each other with no character and the same shops repeated over and over. Whitby thus far has escaped such a fate.Cheers NeilAlf LESTER Many thanks for your thoughtful words and positive feedback. I'm really pleased you connected with it in this way, its exactly what I had hoped for. Best RegardsAlfNIKIThank you for your interest and kind words, much appreciated.Kind RegardsAlfZSOLTSincere thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts, much appreciated.Best RegardsAlf Link to comment
Not Here 93 Posted August 2, 2011 Alf... Your usual excellent composition with exquisite detail. I see that everyone shares in the opinion that the man adds to the shot as an interesting subject and I don't disagree, even though initially I admit his relative size and nearness to the bottom margin did catch my attention. After some study I think the entire image is presented very well as is... Good stuff... Mike Link to comment
3m 0 Posted August 2, 2011 Alf, I clearly prefer this photo of Whitby over the other one you posted. I don't know if it has to do with the HDR effect, or the scenery depicted, but I like the overall ambiance and mood better in this one....It is a beautifully presented perspective of Whitby (which, btw, I have never visited - so far). The wide angle enabled you to get so many details in the picture: stretching from the church tower on the left, to the far end of the pier on the right, and you even managed to get the lighthouse in the photo as well :-) Your composition is really very attractive. However, and I know that I'm maybe the odd one out here, I personally would have preferred the photo without the gentleman on the right... Maybe if he had been somewhat further away ( and/or possibly sitting on one of the lower steps), I possibly would not have had the same reaction.... I feel that he adds too much weight to the photo as is... (although I can also see him adding balance to the photo too, as some people are saying above) I find that he is a somewhat overbearing presence, and dominates the photo too much, imo.... The photo seems too 'overloaded with elements'... Maybe it is his slightly slouching demeanor and/or the way he is standing so close to the edge of the photo, that makes me feel this way -- I don't know... I just think that he should't be as much the protagonist here as he appears now.....In a very different photo of yours -- this one -- I feel that the subject really adds (scale) to the surroundings, while at the same time I get to really appreciate the scenery as well. Looking at the Whitby photo above, I get a good sense of the scenery of this town and port, but I don't get a " wow feeling" as I have had with some of your other photos.... Really hope that you don't mind me expressing my feeling, Alf -- I like the photo, and technically it is very well done, but I don't feel as enthusiastic about it for some reason...Kind regards to you, Marjolein Link to comment
alfbailey 2 Posted August 2, 2011 MIKE Many Thanks for your thoughts and encouraging feedback, much appreciated. I actually shared that concern about the gentleman being a bit too close tothe edge of the frame at the bottom. He wasn't when I composed the shot, but after some perspective alteration the final crop left him a bit tight to the edge.Cheers MikeAlfMARJOLEIN Sincere thanks for your thoughts and feedback. I don't mind at all that you point out the shortcomings of the image, in fact your honest opinions are invaluable to me. Personally I too think the that the gentlemean adds balance to the image, though I concur with your comment about him leaning back, that does seem to throw things out slightly and looks a bit awkward. I think you also have a point when you mention his "overbearing presence" though this seems much more apparent when just viewing the thumbnail or normal size, when viewed large I think the other elements of the image become more the focus of attention. I suppose the image was never going to have the "wow" factor and I accept that, it was more of an attempt to show the character and charm of the town. I just hope the image hasn't put you off visiting, it was intended to have the opposite effect, and it really is a lovely place.: - )Cheers MarjoleinAlf Link to comment
192 0 Posted August 3, 2011 Wonderful capture with unique pov and excellent colour tones.The atmosphere is great,also!...Best regards(Bobby). Link to comment
gunnar1664882369 1 Posted August 3, 2011 The quality of this image is impressive (not surprising, it is as usual from you, but still I have to mention it). Very lovely atmosphere, silent and peaceful. Beautiful picture. Link to comment
ruudalbers 1 Posted August 3, 2011 A very nicely composed beautiful shot, Alf!With best regards,Ruud. Link to comment
drorbaldinger 0 Posted August 4, 2011 I would stop right there too. the view is breathtaking. there is so much character to these places. enlarging the image makes it so much more impressive and real. amazing sharpness. Link to comment
drkallol 0 Posted August 4, 2011 Yes,the larger view reveals the definition of the image.Corner to corner..every subtle details are very much prominant with faithful colours.Well choosen POV too.What a lovely place to be there!A real treat for eyes.Thanks for sharing.My best regards.Kallol Link to comment
alfbailey 2 Posted August 4, 2011 BOBBY Many Thanks, you are very kind. It was a very peaceful time of day.Best RegardsAlfGUNNAR Sincere thanks, at 5.30 am it was indeed quiet and peaceful, but a very different scene was to be witnessed in the evening, with tourists still climbing the steps in large numbers up until 10.00pm when I gave up and headed back to my hotel. I started out the next morning half expecting to find them still there, but to my relief all was quiet.Best RegardsAlfRUUD Many Thanks for your input and encouragement.Kind regardsAlfDROR Ahhh yes I knew the sharpness would be to your taste : -) I am still employing the High Pass filter method you kindly showed me along with a few tweaks in Unsharp Mask. But in all honesty not too much needed as the 14 - 24mm lens is superb. Thanks for stopping by Dror and don't forget the open invite for Tea at the Abbey Cafe when next you and your good lady visit these shores.Best RegardsAlfKALLOLMany thanks for sharing your observations and thoughts, much appreciated! Every step of the 199 reveal a slightly different viewpoint I'm not sure this is the best, but it was one that I managed to get between the showers of rain.Best RegardsAlf Link to comment
GailAnthonyHarmer 6 Posted August 6, 2011 Certainly a better view, but it truly is good to see both. They for me, both have their merits. This is a great view, so full of detail. Everyone has pretty well used most of the adjectives! I'm glad you were able to get this shot before returning home. It was a bit of a drive, and fortunately the weather stayed quite dry!Sorry I'm a bit late, kind regards always, Gail Link to comment
sumon_mukherjee 0 Posted August 6, 2011 This is a really impressive photograph with marvelous color tonality and amazing dof. The blue backdrop and its charming cloud-patterns are simply poetic. The steps, the lamppost and the lonely man have definitely enriched the mood of the composition. The mid-ground is a bit heavy, considering the embedded feeling-tone of the image. To me, the brightness of the left corner of the foreground is a bit loud. Thanks a lot for sharing this visual pleasure. Best regards. Link to comment
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