samrat 1 Posted July 26, 2011 Please comment on the composition of this photo. I'm sure there is room for improvement. Also, would the photo have been better off without the island and the overhead cable? Many thanks. Link to comment
olafdevries 0 Posted July 27, 2011 Samrat, I like it the way it is..! It's breathing..! The postures are fantastic. He is watching like a captain. Wall, mast and lines give the impression of a ship. Maybe "The Sailing Island" would have been my title..! Fine shot, congrats..! Link to comment
samrat 1 Posted July 27, 2011 Thanks, Olaf. I did not know what caption to give, so I based it on the bar seen in the photo. I'm glad you made sense out of the overall atmosphere; I like aspects of it but thought there were too many things which were not right. Link to comment
rajnishduara 0 Posted July 28, 2011 I like the way the man is standing. He is in a more interesting pose, the cables go fine with me, it gives a lot of realism to the hot. I am a bit distracted with the other people around. Just my inquisitiveness, maybe cropping to avoid even the "Magic Sunset" would have kept some more interest to the subject. Link to comment
samrat 1 Posted July 28, 2011 I tried to get a candid shot as best I could with the changing light of the setting sun. The problem was that he kept on moving. This is one of four photos. I have a cropped version as well, and I've uploaded it for your reference. I tried two or three croppings from this; this was the one I decided on. Photographer's preference ;) Link to comment
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