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THis was my attemt at a magazine cover style photot... shot on

Portra UC..any comments would be greatly appreciated!

Very nice photo and model. Good natural lighting.

Good effort - well lit and good pose!

Nice lighting, a lovely pose, and a beautiful girl.

This one really grabs me and makes me want to know her; exudes sexuality in a subtle way

Nice work! The lighting is natural, the model looks relaxed and the straps around her upper arms are a nice touch of realism. IMHO, cropping the toes is a bit of a distraction; perhaps they'd be better covered or you could crop in closer. All-in-all a good effort.

I love this lighting!

Nice work, James. Is that a wedding dress? Very nice feel.

Great work

Great shot. Looks like a magazine cover to me.

I agree with Bert, its a good picture, but one to play with the cropping. Assuming you're showing it full frame, try cropping at the bottom to take her foot out completly - there some odd perspective on the other leg too and you'd lose that as a by-product, and have more of her face in the picture. She's also slightly off centre, so since you need to crop the edges to get the aspect ratio back, you could move her way off centre, on bang in the middle.

Magazine's would like a little dead space at the top so you also crop at the bottom and paint in a bit of extra background above here head.

Like I say, experiment, the picture's worth it.

A very Simple yet wonderful shot! Nice lighting, good exposure. Good looking model. The makings of a great portrait.