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very good

Please view the full-size picture, it's sharper than it may appear in small

size.

This shot was taken about one year ago, and at the time I was not so

satisfied, but as I stumbled upon it days ago, I thought it's not so bad :)

Critiques and advice to improve are welcome :)

a very good pose...i'm not sure how I feel about the background though but it doesn't distract too much...i'd be more concerned with the lower left off gray thing....David

Best regards Gabriele!

PDE

A little softness does not bother me...nor does the over exposed area on her left cheek...I'm more interested in how everything fits together...is there something to draw me in and hold my attention...here you've done this with her wistful expression...accentuated by her hand placement and sprig of hair she's holding...all give this a moody evocative feel...I can't help but wonder what she is thinking...I like this.