White dress II

I followed Sumon Mukherjee advise and used more negative space. Let me

know what do you think.

This is the original image.

Personally, I like the more negative space to our right, though there may be too much space above her head (an 8x12 instead?).  Just my opinion, others may vary.  A very beautiful capture, and she portrays a lot of emotion into the image.  Thank you for sharing.  Best regards...

-Dave

Sono d'accordo con gli amici sopra,in piu a mio vedere,troppo nero assoluto !

non crea profondità ,ed è un peccato,perche la foto è bella.  ciao paul

I like it as it is , with the space . Bill

I have to agree with Bill. I think the diagonal lines work better in the original, rather than trying to make it a rule-of-thirds crop. The extra space on the right gives it a bit of a sense of mystery.

Overall, an evocative and well executed image.

Fantastic composition, congrats !

Andrew, perhaps a touch more negative space on the bottom, of the original. The model's reflection feels crowded there, but the rest of the image is balanced very well. I suppose it's all about personal taste. Very nice work.

Dave, Paule, William, Steve, Leonardo and Randall,

Thank you very much for your thoughts and suggestions. It seems that we all agree!  Randall, I did not use more negative space at the bottom since I did not wanted to add an extra element of symetry, but I think that it would work fine.

Thanks to people like you photo.net is a great place to be.

Andrew

I like the lace dress, where did you buy it?Monique

To me, this one is definitely better. The original one was bolder but this one is more artistic. Best regards.