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Abstract 36


robertbrown

Shot late afternoon sun and shadow.


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What is it? Hull of a rusty ship? I like it!

 

One comment though - what's up with the bit of blue at the top? Would it be better cropping it out, or perhaps reframe so we get to seem ore of the blue? It does make me curious.

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Comments, ratings appreciated on this abstract. I'm constructing a

folder these which will be shown at a local gallery later this year.

This is actually part of a metal ramp leading to a pier. The purpose

of these is to take pieces of objects and render them in such a way

that they are not recognizable--I'm attempting to take these to purely

color and form. Thanks for any comments.

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I like the colors and the repeating of the yellow above the red as well. I'm not sure what it is, but in the lower-left thirds point is some sort of grey dust-ball. IMO it is a bit distracting (then again, if it couldn't have been brushed off then I guess Iit belongs there). I like the other metal bolts (or seemingly raised circles) on the surface, just not the 'dust-thing' [grin].
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you've got it here: Purely color and form, in this case color. The blue is helpful, I think. It imparts a nice contrast to the red. If not helpful, then I don't see it as harmful. These are sunset colors. Congratulations on your show. That's great news!
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