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This is a very complicated subject that needs to be simplified. There is so much motion in this photo that it needs to be more organized. The arch should go straight across the frame from side to side. The 4 red ceiling coffers should be parallel to the top of the image frame and the bottom ceiling should be parallel with the image frame like it is. This would be a complicated composition to arrive at but it would allow you to focus on the details rather than the "dizzy" aspect. You have a good eye to have spotted this view! Lighting is excellent!
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i think that the "dizzy" aspect was intentional. i like the sense of movement created by presenting a symmetrical subject in an asymmetrical way. i think if there's any weakness it's the brightness at the right side of the frame, but i'm not sure that bothers me, because the strong diagonal which occupies the left of the frame balances it to a certain degree, or completes the tension across the picture.
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Interesnting idea to use this view point but the composition is a bit too complicated IMO. i think it might have been better to be more selective.
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for the constructive comments. The image was composed asymetrically on purpose, generally I find that symetrical compositions result in a static image that is, perhaps, not as interesting and lacking in flow........
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Well, it has a different perspectiv, but the horizontal angles (needs straightening) and the center cut (dead middle) distract me. good exposure, good sharpness.
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