caught with a mouthful

Please comment/critique. Thanks.

Excellent work on the perspective end Sam. Honker...a flock just flew over minutes ago in formation honking away. They go to a little lake nearby in the morn. You could afford to darken sky here or contast more...very good.

Paul, once in a while in this part of the world the sky is not dark - so I`d like to leave it bright when that happens, whatever the aesthetic consequences! Thanks very much for your appreciation & critique.