KMA 004

My daughter helping me improve my portraiture work, I hope. Any

comments or critiques greatly appreciated. I thank you in advance for

your time.

-Dave

David - 

Good solid photo - I looks like you captured the spirit of the subject well. It is also lit well for the subjects features. Good job there.

There does appear to be a little tug of war visually between the hands and the eyes - with the subject laughing and the eyes closing up (as they often do), visually I have to hunt for the eyes, but the hands are really right up there in front to grab my attention. I'm not sure what a better pose would be - maybe if the subject was moved to her left a little and the hands lowered away from the face?

That said - it's a image any parent would be proud to display in the home - well done, and thank you for sharing!

Mike