katy_t_beach_09a

Coming down to the level of the model gives it a more intimate feeling. I appreciate the out of focus area in the front which further enhances the effect privacy, but I feel that part of the white area at the edge could possibly be sacrificed without negative effect. Interest work. 

I think I would have liked to see the model in the lower part of the frame. While the space she occupies in the fram would be the same, it would give the viewer the feeling that she was closer to the viewer.