Campillo de Dueñas

Would like to know your opinion on the darkroom work on this photo.

Thanks in advance for your opinions

Very nice atmosphere. But I think I would like the color version more. That would give more contrast between land and sky.

I'll oblige your request and upload the colour version to my Lanscapes of Spain folder

Me gustaría ver la foto en color

What was that? ???

 

Alberto, your landscapes have much soul.

 

I would have thought about stepping in front of the foreground clump to get it out of the photo. What about you? Also, what is that metal object to the right side? Would it have been possible to move it so that it was more recognizable? I wish I could tell what it is so that the photo would have more interest. Some photographers have a problem with moving things from where they were found. Do you?

The darkroom work here is good Alberto, but the composition is just a bit stagnant due to the centered horizon. I would have eliminated probably half of the foreground here, to above the bush in the center. The sky is very dramatic, along with the structures on the hillside, so I would have concentrated on them. Still, it's very nice work.

Alberto, la luz está un tanto fuerte y falta un foco de interés. Bello cielo, sin embargo.